Acts of remembrance
sound
like water
pouring out
over
worn linoleum floors
and feel
like the slow
and steady walk
toward hunger in
the long wait
since
your last meal
.
Remembering
It sounds
like water
pouring out all over
the floor
and feels like
the slow process
of becoming hungry
again in the
long wait after
a meal
I really like what you have done here. The words work well together
caseyhasfaded: Thanks so much.